Shine your light on...
 
Notifications
Clear all

Shine your light on me


ckiphen
(@ckiphen)
Noble Member
Joined: 7 years ago
Posts: 1478
Topic starter  

Shine your light on me

 

Verse

I’m in the middle of my life and I’m lost

And I can’t find my way.

I’ve gotten turned around and I’ve drifted.

I’ve lost my anchor chain.

Pre chorus

I’ve weathered storms, I’ve survived

But I’m looking for dry land.

I’m running low on courage.

I’m kneeling with folded hands.

Chorus

Oh life’s a stormy sea.

Mercy, mercy me.

Please throw me a lifeline.

Shine your light on me.

Verse

I’m looking for a break in the weather.

Just a glimpse of the sun.

Maybe a seabird to show me the way.

A swig from a jug of rum.

Pre chorus

I’ve weathered storms, I’ve survived

But I’m looking for dry land.

I’m running low on courage.

I’m kneeling with folded hands.

Chorus

Oh life’s a stormy sea.

Mercy, mercy me.

Please throw me a lifeline.

Shine your light on me.

Verse

I will take what I get, hope it’s enough.

Pray for a guiding star.

Comes a time a man needs to ask for help.

No matter who you are.

Pre chorus

I’ve weathered storms, I’ve survived

But I’m looking for dry land.

I’m running low on courage.

I’m kneeling with folded hands.

Chorus

Oh life’s a stormy sea.

Mercy, mercy me.

Please throw me a lifeline.

Shine your light on me.

 

carroll kiphen


Quote
Guy E. Trepanier
(@guy-e-trepanier)
A Night To ReMember
Joined: 7 years ago
Posts: 177
 

Hi Carroll, I have composed a melody for your lyrics. Here is the result.

You can do whatever you want with it. If you don't like, just ignore it.

Links to the song:

uke: https://app.box.com/s/jzj0mprsqmbq38ec2tfx9c5hi1481dk3
mp3: https://app.box.com/s/u2bku8brhymmseqbjt92anbpekbxrxci
pdf: https://app.box.com/s/o4i07bj4amoda8a4olzuxwo1bqr9689z

Shine Your Light On Me #426
++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
© Lyrics: Carroll Kiphen, 2019.
© Melody: Guy E. Trepanier, 2019.

Intro: 4 bars (key of C) I=C, IV=F, V7=G7, 3m=Em, 2m=Dm, 6m=Am

(I)5__3__/5__3__/(IV)4_6_(V7)5_4_/(I)1__~'

I’m /(I)middle of my life and I /am lost / (1/33123_12/3_1_~~/) <= verse 8
(I)_ I just can’t find my /(V7)way / (~335_32/2__~~/)
(3m)I’ve got turned around and /(2m)I have drifted (55335_3_/4_2_4_2_/)
(V7)I have lost my anchor /(I)chain / (72727_2_/1__~~/)

(6m)'I’ve weathered storms, I’ve sur-/vived / ('6656_35/6__~~/) <= pre ch 8
(3m)But I’m looking for dry /land / (53537_5_/3__~~/)
(2m)'I’m running low on cou-/(V7)rage / ('4242_44/5__~~/)
(2m)'I’m kneeling with folded /(V7)hands / ('4246_44/2__~~/)

(I)Oh life’s a stormy /(V7)sea / (8_878_5_/7__~~/) <= chorus 8
(IV)Mercy, mercy /(V7)me / (6_4_8_6_/7__~~/)
(IV)Please throw me a /(I)lifeline / (6__8_64/5__3_~/)
(IV)Shine your (V7)light on /(I)me / (8_6_5_4_/1__~~/)

I’m /(I)looking for a break in the /weather / (1/33123_12/3_1_~~/) <= verse 8
(I)_ Just a glimpse of the /(V7)sun / (~335_32/2__~~/)
(3m)Maybe a seabird to /(2m)show me the way (55335_3_/4_2_4_2_/)
(V7)A swig from a jug of /(I)rum / (72727_2_/1__~~/)

Pre chorus 8
Chorus 8

Instrumental: 8 bars
(I)5__3__/5__3__/(IV)4_6_(V7)5_4_/(I)3__~~/
(I)5__3__/5__3__/(IV)4_6_(V7)5_4_/(I)1__~'

I /(I)will take what I get, hope it’s /enough / (1/33123_12/3_1_~~/) <= verse 8
(I)_ Pray for a guiding /star / (~335_32/1__~~/)
(3m)Comes a time a man needs /(2m)to ask for help / (55335_3_/4_2_4_2_/)
(V7)Does'nt matter who you /(I)are / (72727_2_/1__~~/)

Pre chorus 8
Chorus 8
Chorus 8
(IV)Shine your (V7)light on /(I)me / (8_6_5_7_/8__~~/)
_ /

Remark: I don't know why but I sang "Show your light on me" at the end. Sorry for the little mistake.

 

K.I.S.S. Keep It Simple and Singable
https://www.soundclick.com/bands3/default.cfm?bandID=588312
https://soundcloud.com/guyetrep : in English (my voice + ukulele)
https://soundcloud.com/guyechante : en Français (in french)
https://soundcloud.com/user-380042223 : songs with lyricists
https://www.reverbnation.com/control_room/artist/1969477/songs


ReplyQuote
ckiphen
(@ckiphen)
Noble Member
Joined: 7 years ago
Posts: 1478
Topic starter  

As always tgank you and feel free to use it as you please

carroll kiphen


ReplyQuote
ckiphen
(@ckiphen)
Noble Member
Joined: 7 years ago
Posts: 1478
Topic starter  

I think this is the best one you've done for me. Feel free to post it for feedback. Thanks!

carroll kiphen


ReplyQuote
YrralMallik
(@yrralmallik)
Noble Member
Joined: 7 years ago
Posts: 1591
 

Enjoyed Da Listen Guys.(;LOVE IT;)

 

Larry G. Killam


ReplyQuote
Gavin
(@gavin)
Noble Member
Joined: 7 years ago
Posts: 1007
 

I agree with Carroll. This is one of your best, Guy. You are always so generous with putting music to others' lyrics, and this one fits like a glove. There's some awkward vocal phrasing which you could go back and correct, but I enjoyed it. Great lyric too.

I may or may not be an enigma
http://mysteriousbeings.com


ckiphen liked
ReplyQuote
Share: