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MartinG
(@marting)
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Hello, I haven’t been around for a while. Unfortunately, I haven’t had much time for music in recent years—we’ve had two kids :). Lately, I’ve been experimenting a bit with lyrics again, mostly nostalgic ones. Here, I’ve tried to capture the place where I grew up in a text... I’d really appreciate any feedback and suggestions for improvement.

As you can see, I am not a native speaker in English...

 

Lat 47.4556/Lon 15.9806

I was born right here, where the forest meets the town,
Where church bells chime and brass bands play around.
Riding through the fields, the warm wind from the south,
With friends in the alleys, feeling home’s true mouth.
We’d stand on the meadows as summer days would start,
Fifty kilometers to the highway, that’s apart.

Chorus
This is where I’m from,
This is where I was born.

Verse 2
Here’s a small shop serving folks in a row,
In old houses with gardens where wildflowers grow.
There are inns that no one really dares to roam,
Meals on the table by noon, waiting at home.
Balloons float high above the valleys in view,
And words can be heavier than deeds we pursue.
Endless green fields in a gentle embrace,
The last of the snow often melts without a trace.

Chorus
This is where I’m from,
This is where I was born.

Verse 3
You can take folks from the village, but not the village from them,
And I’m not quite sure what this means in the end.
Now I stand at the crossroads by the old inn’s sign,
Taking a deep breath, leaving the past behind.
To show you who I am and where I came to be,
Up the hill, where the sun still shines for me.
Give me a clap and a hug, that’s the way,
This is my path and my home, where I stay.

Chorus
This is where I was born,
This is where I’m from.

Every once in a while I get in the mood or so... and start to play...


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Gavin
(@gavin)
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Joined: 6 years ago
Posts: 1004
 

Great to hear from you, Martin. Here are some suggestions. (I think this would sound great in German)

I was born right here, where the forest meets the town,
Where church bells chime and brass bands sound.
Riding through the fields, the warm south wind,
Laughing with friends, the sun on our skin.
We’d stand in the meadows as summer unfurled,
Fifty kilometers to the highway, another world.

Chorus
This is where I’m from,
This is where I was born.

Verse 2
Here’s a small shop where folks stand in a row,
Old houses with gardens where wildflowers grow.
Here's an inn where men swiftly finish their beer,
"Meal's on the table at home, shouldn't really be here."
Balloons float high above the valleys in view,
And the words that we say outweigh the things that we do
Endless green fields unfold like a quilt,
The last of the snow is gone from the hills.

Chorus
This is where I’m from,
This is where I was born.

Verse 3
You can take folks from the village, but not the village from them,
And I’m not quite sure what this means in the end.
Now I stand at the crossroads by the old inn’s sign,
Take a deep breath, leave the past behind.
To show you who I am and where I came to be,
Up the hill, where the sun still shines for me.
My tomorrow springs, singing, from my yesterday,
This is my path and my home, where I stay.

Chorus
This is where I was born,
This is where I’m from.

I may or may not be an enigma
http://mysteriousbeings.com


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