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14/03/2022 4:33 am
Hi,
Adele's songs gave me the inspiration to write two Ballad/sad songs, this is one of them " My Promise".. Also, I need music for this song.
I think it's a Pop or pop/soul ballad song, slow tempo. something like Adele songs.
Title: My Promise © 2021 by Nelly Tharwat. All Rights Reserved.
Verse 1:
I still recall the last time I sew you
Still hear your farewell words in my ears;
"Wait me baby, I will always love you!"
I wonder if you still keep the love vow,
Or you don't remember me an'
You have a new love now?!
Pre- Chorus:
In between, In between
Hope and fear
In between, In between
I still live there
Chorus :
I've waited, I've waited, I've waited for you!
I'm keepin' , I'm keepin' , my promise to you!
Do you feel, do you feel, do you feel like I do?!
I'm keepin' , I'm keepin' , my promise to you!
Verse 2:
After all these years, I ain't found you
I'm alone, who will hold me so close
A million miles away from me though,
I have a hope to meet you once again
Now, my heart who's talkin', yeaah
'cause love don't have a brain!
Pre- Chorus:
In between, In between
Hope and fear
In between, In between
I still live there
Chorus :
I've waited, I've waited, I've waited for you!
I'm keepin' , I'm keepin' , my promise to you!
Do you feel, do you feel, do you feel like I do?
I'm keepin' , I'm keepin' , my promise to you!
Bridge:
Sometimes I looked up at the dark sky and cried;
"Will you Come back someday and make me satisfied?!"
No one heard me but the stars above
and they never never- never replied!
Chorus :
I've waited, I've waited, I've waited for you!
I'm keepin' , I'm keepin' , my promise to you!
Do you feel, do you feel, do you feel like I do?!
I'm keepin' , I'm keepin' , my promise to you!
Chorus
This topic was modified 4 years ago 2 times by Nelly Tharwat
Reaching the top is so hard but not impossible.
Guy E. Trepanier liked
17/03/2022 10:53 am
Hi Nelly! I have composed a melody for your lyric.
Go to your folder in BOX : I sent you an email for the link
There are 4 files identified « mypromisetoyou » that you can download, read, listen and print.
Do whatever you want with them.
Have fun!
Guy E. Trepanier
There is an attached file below to have a direct listen (my voice + ukulele).
My Promise To You (#573)
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© Lyrics: Nelly Tharwat, 2022.
© Melody: Guy E. Trépanier, 2022.
Intro: 4 bars (key of C) I=C, IV=F, V7=G7, 6m=Am
(IV)4__6_4_/4__6_4_/(V7)5__424_/1__~~/
(I)Still recall the last time /I saw you / (33313_1_/5_3_1_~/) < verse 12
(3m)Still hear your farewell words /in my ears / (33373_7_/3_5_3_~/)
(I)"Wait for me I'll always /lo_ve you!" / (33313_1_/5_3_1_~/)
(3m)Wonder if you still keep /our love vow, / (33373_7_/3_5_3_~/)
(IV)Or you don't remember /me / (44414_6_/4__~~/)
(V7)You have a new love /(I)now?! / (5_427_2_/3__~~/)
(6m)In between, /In between / (3_.63_~/3_.63_~/) < pre-chorus 8
(IV)Hope and /(V7)fear / (4__1__/7__~~/)
(6m)In between, /In between / (3_.63_/3_.63_~/)
(IV)I still live /(V7)there / ((4__1_4_/5__~~/)
(I)I've waited, /I've waited, / (8__5_3_/8__5_3_/) < chorus 16
(3m)I've waited for /you! / (7__537_/5__~~/)
(IV)I'm keepin', /I'm keepin', / (4__6_4_/4__6_4_/)
(V7)my promise to /(I)you! / (5__424_/5__~~/)
(I)Do you feel, /do you feel, / (8_.58_~/8_.58_~/)
(3m)do you feel like I /do?! / (7_.57_57/5__~~/)
(IV)I'm keepin', /I'm keepin', / (4__6_4_/4__6_4_/)
(V7)my promise to /(I)you! / (5__424_/1__~~/)
(I)After all these years, I /ain't found you / (33313_1_/5_3_1_~/) < verse 12
(3m)I'm alone, who will hold /me so close / (33373_7_/3_5_3_~/)
(I)A million miles away /from me though, / 33313_1_/5_3_1_~/)
(3m)I just hope to meet you /once again / (33373_7_/3_5_3_~/)
(IV)Now, my heart who's talkin', /yeaah / (44414_6_/4__~~/)
(V7)cause love don't have a /(I)brain! / (5_427_2_/3__~~/)
pre-chorus 8
chorus 16
(IV)Sometimes I looked up at the /sky and cried / (4_414141/4_6_4_~/) < bridge 8
(V7)"Will you Come back and make me /satisfied?!" / (5_545454/5_4_5_~/)
(IV)No one heard me but the /stars above / (6_4_6464/6_4_6_~/
(V7)and they never never /replied! / (5_4_5454/2_5_~~/)
Chorus 16
(V7)My promise to /(I)you! / (5__424_/1__~~/)
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K.I.S.S. Keep It Simple and Singable
https://www.soundclick.com/bands3/default.cfm?bandID=588312
https://soundcloud.com/guyetrep : in English (my voice + ukulele)
https://soundcloud.com/guyechante : en Français (in french)
https://soundcloud.com/user-380042223 : songs with lyricists
https://www.reverbnation.com/control_room/artist/1969477/songs
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