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AllfortheLord
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"Lightseeker"

 

I've been on a journey my whole life, trying to right my wrongs into rights
I've traveled far and wide only in my mind, and the places I have been most won't find, coz 

((chorus)
I'm a lightseeker searchin for my land,the one that was promised same as Abraham
when i'm in the darkness i start feeling weaker,then I turn 'twards the light coz I'm a lightseeker

I fell off the wagon to my old ways-s-s,  haven't done his will haven't gave him praise,
won't make any excuses for what I've done, just try even harder to please your son, coz
 
((chorus)
I'm a lightseeker searchin for my land,the one that was promised same as Abraham
when i'm in the darkness i start feeling weaker,then I turn 'twards the light coz I'm a lightseeker

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ckiphen
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Seems like it needs more verse but who knows somnetimes it works fine when it's put to song.

 

carroll kiphen


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AllfortheLord
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@ckiphen I try keep em under 4 mins total say everything within 2 verses if it's too long the listener loses interests


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