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Joy Riding


ckiphen
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Joy Riding

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She played with his heart till she broke it.

She saw the damage and cried.

She toyed with the boy and enjoyed it.

Till she saw she’d ruined his life.

Pre chorus

Told him she didn’t love him.

Said he was no fun.

He took to drink lost his job.

Thought she was the one.

Chorus

She was a reckless driver

Found it exciting.

She was a careless lover.

She was joy riding.

Verse

She found a new guy and she left him.

Left the wreck she caused behind.

She wanted to forget she’d hurt him.

But the conscience isn’t blind.

Pre chorus

Told him she didn’t love him.

Said he was no fun.

He took to drink lost his job.

Thought she was the one.

Chorus

She was a reckless driver

Found it exciting.

She was a careless lover.

She was joy riding.

Bridge

She didn’t enjoy her new toy.

She missed how kind he was.

But knew there was no going back.

She’d wrecked her chance at love.

Tag

While she was joy riding.

carroll kiphen


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YrralMallik
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But the concious doesn't sleep Keep or sweep my friend.

Larry G. Killam


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ckiphen
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Doesn't rhyme with behind

carroll kiphen


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Robbi
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Hey Carroll,
I like this one. Can I give it a try?

All the best
Robert

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ckiphen
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Of course!

carroll kiphen


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Robbi
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Hey Carroll,
this is what I hear when I read your lines...

https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14089513

All the best
Robert

 

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ckiphen
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Cool. Like it more each time I listen. Always a good sign.

carroll kiphen


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Gavin
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Great lyric that seems to be in excellent musical hands. I think I would stick with "She was joy riding," rather than "Always joy riding."

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