coz everytime he heard a squeakin sound his nose started twitchin fast
ol Jake started shaking like a leaf coz we were in the rabitt zone
Years went by with lots of hunts then that awful dreaded day came,
Hello Allforthelord,
Thank you for sharing this lyric. Do you have music for this? I noticed as I was reading, seems to be a lot of words to sing. Correct me if I'm wrong. it appears your structure is verse, chorus, verse, chorus, (and this is where I'm confused), is it a verse or a bridge, then lastly chorus. Good luck and best wishes,
Speak soon
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coz everytime he heard a squeakin sound, his nose started twitchin fast
ol Jake started shaking like a leaf, coz we were in the rabitt zone
Years went by with lots of hunts ,then that awful dreaded day came,
If you take out or change the 3rd verse so the puppy doesn't die, this would make a cute children's song. "Jake the Rabbit Hound" is an easy to sing, catchy phrase, and young kids would sing it all day long.
phil
are you applying for the composition of this song? can you make a radio quality demo for it? do you have a band or can play all of the instruments needed>? the final tweeking of any of my songs can be done when it comes to it
If you're asking me All, I'm afraid, no. I barely "bang out" stuff on my guitar!
phil
