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AllfortheLord
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Jake The Rabbitt Hound
 
I got him as a puppie he was four months old knew he was diff'rent from the rest,
coz everytime he heard a squeakin sound his nose started twitchin fast
(chorus)
Jake, the rabbit hound he sure could chase em down anywhere  Jake's bound bound to be a rabbit round
ohh Jake the rabbit hound
 
One day in the mountains takin a easy stroll when a eiry breeze came along,
ol Jake started shaking like a leaf coz we were in the rabitt zone
 
(chorus)
Jake, the rabbit hound he sure could chase em down anywhere  Jake's bound bound to be a rabbit round
ohh Jake the rabbit hound

Years went by with lots of hunts then that awful dreaded day came,

now as I look to the heavens above I imagine St Pete callin out his name

(chorus)
Jake, the rabbit hound he sure could chase em down anywhere  Jake's bound bound to be a rabbit round
ohh Jake the rabbit hound
 

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Deacon
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Hello Allforthelord,

Thank you for sharing this lyric.  Do you have music for this?  I noticed as I was reading, seems to be a lot of words to sing.  Correct me if I'm wrong. it appears your structure is verse, chorus, verse, chorus, (and this is where I'm confused), is it a verse or a bridge, then lastly chorus.  Good luck and best wishes,

Speak soon

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AllfortheLord
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the music is in my head, went over singin it many times changed words etc it fits will be a fast bpm, 3 verses 3 choruses
 
Jake The Rabbitt Hound
 
I got him as a puppie he was four months old, knew he was diff'rent from the rest,
coz everytime he heard a squeakin sound, his nose started twitchin fast
(chorus)
Jake, the rabbit hound he sure could chase em down, anywhere  Jake's bound ,bound to be a rabbit round
ohh Jake the rabbit hound
 
One day in the mountains takin a easy stroll, when a eiry breeze came along,
ol Jake started shaking like a leaf, coz we were in the rabitt zone
 
(chorus)
Jake, the rabbit hound he sure could chase em down, anywhere  Jake's bound, bound to be a rabbit round
ohh Jake the rabbit hound

Years went by with lots of hunts ,then that awful dreaded day came,

now as I look to the heavens above, I hear St Pete callin out his name

 

(chorus)
Jake, the rabbit hound he sure could chase em down, anywhere  Jake's bound, bound to be a rabbit round
ohh Jake the rabbit hound
 

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philgnfla
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If you take out or change the 3rd verse so the puppy doesn't die, this would make a cute children's song. "Jake the Rabbit Hound" is an easy to sing, catchy phrase, and young kids would sing it all day long.

phil


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AllfortheLord
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are you applying for the  composition of this song? can you make a radio quality demo for it? do you have a band or can play all of the instruments needed>? the final tweeking of any of my songs can be done when it comes to it

 


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philgnfla
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If you're asking me All, I'm afraid, no. I barely "bang out" stuff on my guitar!

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