I think of delete the " Intro" and just begin with this verse :

When he hurries to his large cattle farm                                 10
riding his horse and followed by his dog " Knight"             10
That scene makes you feel like you're watchin'                  9
a western movie in black and white !                                   9

I wonder if there's a Horse whinny  sound effect in the beginning of the song. it will be interesting!

It's really long, Nelly. I think you could say this in fewer words.

One thing occurred to me. If he's a billionaire, he would probably have several cars, not one that he changes every year. 🙂

Gavin,

Thanks Gavin for your respond , glad to hear from you...

 
you're right ; If he's a billionaire, he would probably have several cars..   so I can write instead:

He owns a helicopter and two cars. 
or:
 every 4 year he buys a new car. 

 I'm gonna make it shorter..

Re- writing:

Title: "I've Heard People Say" © 2020 by Nelly Tharwat. All Rights Reserved

Verse 1:

When he hurries to his large cattle farm               10
riding his horse and followed by his dog " Knight"      10
That scene makes you feel like you're watchin'        9
a western movie in black and white !             9

Chorus Refrain :
I don't know Barrett Batson but I've heard people say;

Verse 2:

He was the sole heir of his family                 10
after the death of his young brothers                10
He was left with a shipping company            10
plus a farm and a billion dollars                 9

It's hard to meet him. He's always busy         10
living as a prince or a superstar                         10
wears the Italian luxury brands                       9
and owns a helicopter and two cars.           10
or
and every 4 years he buys a new car!           10

Chorus Refrain :
I don't know Barrett Batson but I've heard people say;

Verse 3:

He looks pleased with friends of another of kind           11
Rottweiler dog and a horse of good breed              10
They are the only ones who never                  9
Forsake him in his moment of need             9

He seems vague, always wears his sunglasses       10
Looks like he hides a great secret behind             10
Wants his eyes not to reveal but really            10
His attraction is too strong to hide!          9

Chorus Refrain :
I don't know Barrett Batson but I've heard people say;

Verse 4:

He owns some houses in famous cities               10
but we know he preferred the country life           10
Since his divorce five years ago                           8
He's livin' alone, no kids no wife!                     9

Each woman tries to show up the others         10
with her abilities getting his heart                    10
but they always fail in their planning                   9
and a new lady comes for one more start !        10

Chorus Refrain :
I don't know Barrett Batson but I've heard people say;

Verse 5:

He recently showed with a pretty girl              10
From time to time rumors fly and spread            9
Some say;" he finally fell in love."                       9
But he denied them wholly and said ;               9

Five years has gone since I got my divorce              10
No woman got my heart , It's still my own                 10
That's the reason I'm still unmarried                          9
That is why I'm still living alone                                9

Chorus Refrain :
I don't know Barrett Batson but I've heard people say;

Verse 6:

Being a businessman, and a billionaire                   11
Townsmen consider him their ideal                   10
Really he deserves that and more                        9
That guy who never lost any deal                   9

Chorus Refrain 2 + coda :

I don't know Barrett Batson but I could guess,
The reason of his fame and success,
He depended on himself all the time
and never listened to the jealous voices!.

He owns a helicopter and few dozen  cars. 
he's into stock markets and property on Mars

@ AllfortheLord

Nice Lines!

thank you for your comment, I really like your lines, I think of take the first but I find the number of  syllables is 12 and i need just 9 or 10 syllables.

He owns a helicopter and few dozen  cars.  12

Thanks very much..

@nelly-tharwat

maybe lengthen the others and create new cadence?