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13/11/2019 11:10 pm
Success, new dress
Cold rain, what a mess
Red shoes, tattoos
Barbecue… Honey it don’t matter
Oh no… It don’t matter
I’m gonna’ ruin you anyway
New hair, none there
Lingerie, I don’t care
Hand cuffs, so tough
You’re outa’ luck… Honey it don’t matter
Oh no… It don’t matter
I’m gonna’ ruin you anyway
Contacts, implants
Lipstick, hot wax
Botox, pink socks
Cold fox… Honey it don’t matter
Oh no… It don’t matter
I’m gonna’ ruin you anyway
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14/11/2019 11:44 am
Love this. I think it needs a chorus and/or a bridge. You could certainly get away without a chorus, since the last lines act as refrain, but I think it needs something to break it up and maybe add context. It would also make it a bit longer. I have a feeling this would not be a slow song 🙂
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14/11/2019 12:47 pm
Yea, lol... length is not a problem. Context... I’m trying to work in something about mirrors. What she sees vs what I see kind of thing... but I'd like it to be funny ?
Mirror mirror on the wall...
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14/11/2019 1:19 pm
Mirror mirror on the wall
You don’t seem to know your place
You won’t look that way at all
With makeup smeared across your face...
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16/11/2019 5:27 pm
Mirror mirror, so peculiar
Doesn’t show your true face
You won’t look that way at all
Once we get to my place
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