In your eyes
Verse
There are long walks by the ocean
Laughing holding hands.
There are talks on summer evenings
Going over plans.
I want so to be your lover.
Your sweet lover man.
Chorus
In your eyes I see the future
And it’s my paradise.
I see all I’ll ever want.
In your eyes, in your eyes.
Verse
There are gatherings with family
Good times to be had.
There are moments spent together
Few are ever sad.
I want so to be your husband.
Your forever man.
Chorus
In your eyes I see the future
And it’s my paradise.
I see all I’ll ever want.
In your eyes, in your eyes.
Bridge
In your eyes I see a world of possibilities
A chance to find happiness I never thought I’d see.
Verse
There are nights alone together
Heaven in your arms.
There are evenings that we make love
Neath a sky of stars.
I want so to be your lover.
Come and take my hand.
Chorus
In your eyes I see the future
And it’s my paradise.
I see all I’ll ever want.
In your eyes, in your eyes.
carroll kiphen
Hello Carroll, I like this lyric, might be one verse and one chorus too long, not sure. The imagery is good and helps the way through the lyric. When I saw the title, the first thought was the Peter Gabriel hit back in the 80's, you might consider "Your Eyes" as the title. If you don't mind, I'd like to play around with the structure a little and try some melodies out on it. Thanks for sharing, good luck and best wishes,
Speak soon
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Sure go ahead. Chop some if needed.
carroll kiphen
Ok, Thanks Carroll.
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