I'd rather be a cool cat than a hot dog
so I kept my mouth shut stead of spoutin off
I could blame my troubles on liquor or gals
or maybe even one of my drinkin pals, but that won't further my cause
So I man on up keep it inside, swallow up some of my own male pride not being a hot dog
so I kept my mouth shut stead of spoutin off
I'd rather be a cool cat than a hot dog
It is cute/funny! And your idea of using a honkytonk rhythm fits the lyrics.
phil
thanks it's available to someone who can
do it justice
I really enjoyed reading that. It's cool and self-deprecating at the same time, and what a great hook!
I had a bit of difficulty deciphering the structure because of the way it's laid out on the screen. Once I did, I liked it, although it seems like the last verse has a different pattern from the earlier ones.
I may or may not be an enigma
http://mysteriousbeings.com
yes the last part was done like that to break up the pace and give it a good exit , I went over it several times to make sure
