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ckiphen
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I want that from you

 

Verse

I learned something about you yesterday

That has me thinking.

You might be someone worth dating longer.

Be worth me keeping.

Pre chorus

You were out playing ball

With the neighborhood kids.

Laughing having fun.

The way that my dad did.

Chorus

It changes the way I see you.

I see my dad in you.

I see how he loves momma

And I want that from you.

Verse

You show kindness when its unexpected

That has me thinking.

You may be worth me investigating

What else you’re hiding.

Pre chorus

You know my special song.

What brand perfume I wear.

Somethings different with you.

I never doubt you care.

Chorus

It changes the way I see you.

I see my dad in you.

I see how he loves momma

And I want that from you.

Bridge

My mom is the happiest woman

That I’ve ever seen.

She says find a man who’s like your dad.

You’ll find what love means.

Tag

I see how he loves momma

And I want that from you.

carroll kiphen


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Jenny Stokes
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Nice idea. It's a common enough thing for a woman to want someone like her daddy to love her, but I don't think it's a common theme for a song. Originality points there, C. I think you've a typo in the bridge. Not sure what you're wanting to say there.   : )

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ckiphen
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Yep should read she says. I'll fix that.

carroll kiphen


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