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09/08/2020 8:55 pm
With a pony keg on her shoulder
A bag of charcoal in her hand
It couldn't do any harm
for me to turn on the charm
And tell her I'd love to be her man
So I put on a smile, sucked in my gut
Took out my wallet and said "take what you want"
She said, "watch your mouth and save your pennies
Honey gets old and I ain't pretty!"
I said "baby, what do you mean
You're a bonafide amazon dream
Spend all my money
Let me love you honey
I wanna' to treat you like a queen"
She said "listen boy, you got another thing comin'
I'll do it myself 'cause I'm a full grow woman
so, watch your mouth and save your pennies
Honey gets old and I ain't pretty!"
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09/08/2020 10:52 pm
I had to google pony keg 🙂 I love the way this is going (what a great hook!), but I sense it has some way to go before it's finished. I'm not going to make any suggestions. This is all you. Very real and visual, but surreal at the same time. You have a knack for that.
I may or may not be an enigma
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09/08/2020 11:01 pm
Oh come on Gav... All I'm thinking is a bridge about useless pretty girls who love to be called honey...Â
Where would you take it? We can do two versions 🙂
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09/08/2020 11:20 pm
For it to make sense, you need to call her honey before she says, "Honey gets old."
So I put on a smile, sucked in my gut
Took out my wallet, "Honey take what you want"
Bridge:
Keep your sweet talk for some other girl, Tony
Honey ain't to my taste
It don't go down as good as what's in this pony
Are we gonna let it go to waste?
I may or may not be an enigma
http://mysteriousbeings.com
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09/08/2020 11:35 pm
Lol... yep, some good thoughts! 🙂
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09/08/2020 11:41 pm
we drained that pony
till we were alone
then over her shoulder
she took me home
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