Hello Larry, the title of this lyric is enticing, it makes the reader curious.  There are many visual lines which make your audience want to know more, and you repeat "Ghost Dance", four times in the lyric which helps your audience remember the hook, and you let the reader know the "Ghost Dance" is to honor their forefathers.  There are some distractions which may confuse your audience.  You describe the Indian maidens, the love dance, the Indian lads, and the marriage ceremony, the audience is left to wonder, is this part of the "Ghost Dance"?  The visual on page structure doesn't help the reader to know where a verse ends, where a chorus begins and ends, and if there is a bridge or rest.  Many times your audience (reader) will not take the time to study your lyric without the help of these aids, as there is no music to assist.  I only mention these things to help bring more attention to your lyric.  Good luck and best wishes,

Speak soon

@deacon

Thanks for Da Reply Deacon I hear you Man.I leave all of Dat Stuff up to my co-writers since I only write Da Lyrics.

I understand, good luck with this lyric and best wishes, I would like to hear the song once it is complete, hope you share it with us.

Speak soon