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15/02/2020 1:16 pm
Hello all! here's some co-work I've been working recently, would love to read your feedback
Fibreglass
(Verse1)
Put your crocodile tears on ice
Cause I'm not buying it anymore
Make a fool out of me once, maybe twice
I think it's time that I showed you the door
(Pre-Chorus)
Cause when I stop to think about it
(About it)
I understand you never really cared for me
All this time, so full of shit
I followed your advice so stupidly
(Chorus)
You always said that you'd be there for me
I always thought that you'd never be
You always said that you'd be there for me, there for me
I always thought that you would never be, never be
The one to stab me in the back
With your words like fibreglass
Fibreglass
With your words like fibreglass
Fibreglass
With your words like fibreglass
Fibreglass
(Verse2)
Give your lies to another guy
Cause I won't believe 'em anymore
Finally it's clear you're that fake type
You're not the friend that I'm looking for
(Pre-Chorus)
Cause when I stop to think about it
(About it)
I understand you never really cared for me
All this time, so full of shit
I followed your advice so stupidly
(Chorus)
You always said that you'd be there for me
I always thought that you'd never be
You always said that you'd be there for me, there for me
I always thought that you would never be, never be
The one to stab me in the back
With your words like fibreglass
Fibreglass
With your words like fibreglass
Fibreglass
With your words like fibreglass
Fibreglass
(Verse3)
Do the show for another one
Cause it doesn't affect me anymore
You did things you shouldn't have done
And I don't want to hear of you furthermore
(Pre-Chorus)
Cause when I stop to think about it
(About it)
I understand you never really cared for me
All this time, so full of shit
I followed your advice so stupidly
(Chorus)
You always said that you'd be there for me
I always thought that you'd never be
You always said that you'd be there for me, there for me
I always thought that you would never be, never be
The one to stab me in the back
With your words like fibreglass
Fibreglass
With your words like fibreglass
Fibreglass
With your words like fibreglass
Fibreglass
2020.02.01
16/02/2020 3:02 pm
Hey Bogi, I like this. I've made a few suggestions below to make it sound more natural in conversational English. Use any you like and throw the rest away 🙂
Fibreglass
(Verse1)
Put your crocodile tears on ice
I'm not buying it anymore
Make a fool of me once, maybe twice
I think it's time I showed you the door
(Pre-Chorus)
Cause when I stop to think about it
(About it)
I see you never really cared for me
You can quit the shit, I've had enough of it
I'm setting myself free
(Chorus)
You always said that you'd be there for me
I never thought that you'd ever be
You always said that you'd be there for me, there for me
I never thought that you would ever be, ever be
The one to stab me in the back
With your words like fibreglass
Fibreglass
With your words like fibreglass
Fibreglass
With your words like fibreglass
Fibreglass
(Verse2)
Feed your lies to some other guy
I won't swallow them any more
Give it a break, you're nothing but a fake
Not the friend that I'm looking for
(Pre-Chorus)
Cause when I stop to think about it
(About it)
I see you never really cared for me
You can quit the shit, I've had enough of it
I'm setting myself free
(Chorus)
You always said that you'd be there for me
I never thought that you'd ever be
You always said that you'd be there for me, there for me
I never thought that you would ever be, ever be
The one to stab me in the back
With your words like fibreglass
Fibreglass
With your words like fibreglass
Fibreglass
With your words like fibreglass
Fibreglass
(Verse3)
Do your show for some other sucker
I'm not feeling it any more
Find somewhere else to try your luck. Are
You still here? There's the door.
(Pre-Chorus)
Cause when I stop to think about it
(About it)
I see you never really cared for me
You can quit the shit, I've had enough of it
I'm setting myself free
(Chorus)
You always said that you'd be there for me
I never thought that you'd ever be
You always said that you'd be there for me, there for me
I never thought that you would ever be, ever be
The one to stab me in the back
With your words like fibreglass
Fibreglass
With your words like fibreglass
Fibreglass
With your words like fibreglass
Fibreglass
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Topic starter
16/02/2020 3:20 pm
Thank you Gavin! 🙂 this is awesome
17/02/2020 2:49 pm
Hello Bogi, Great lyric, Gavs suggestions move it along smoothly. I like the analogy of be being stabbed in the back with your words like fiberglass. For anyone who hasn't been cut, poked, or stuck by fiberglass, well IT' HURTS. Congrats to both you and Gav, Thank you for sharing, good luck and best wishes,
Speak soon
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Topic starter
20/02/2020 7:49 am
Thank you Deacon! ? well yeah it is hurts!
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