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29/01/2020 9:30 pm
Everything
You're everything.
Yeah your my everything.
In the morning your my breath of fresh air.
When I need it.
You're everything.
Yeah your my everything.
In the noon hour .
Your my your my afternoon delight.
When I need it.
Your everything.
Yeah your my everything.
In the evening.
Your my dream come true.
When I need it.
Your everything.
Yeah your my everything.
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In the morning,noon hour and evening.
Your Everything.
Yeah your my eveything.
Through the whole day
Baby your everything.
© Copyright May 19th 2017
1:30 P.M. All Rights Reserved
Larry Gordon Killam (SOCAN/ASCAP)
(;Yrral Mallik Publishing;)
Larry G. Killam
02/02/2020 10:37 am
Hello Larry, I believe there is the possibility for a good song in this lyric. We all have had some one in our lives who we had these feelings for at one time or another. Would this lyric attract a larger audience if the singer went deeper into his/her feelings if "everything" were given specific impressions, acts, dreams, or memories your audience could relate to? This is just my opinion only, and may not work with what you want, however "everything" seems to be too generic. Good luck and best wishes,
Speak soon
Music is an international language, say it with a song. deaconmusic4u@gmail.com
03/02/2020 3:14 pm
No problem Larry, good luck and best wishes,
Speak soon
Music is an international language, say it with a song. deaconmusic4u@gmail.com
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