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YrralMallik
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Topic starter 04/01/2020 2:24 pm  

Don't Ever Leave Me

Don't ever leave me.

Don't ever go.

Stay close beside me

Forevermore...

 

(chorus)

Don't ever leave me.

Don't ever go.

Stay close beside me

the full length of my road

help me thru good times
those that are lean

Stay here forever

For eternity.

 

Don't ever leave me

Please never go.

Stay here forever

For eternity.

 

Don't ever leave me.

Always love me.

Stay near me always.

Forevermore

 

Don't ever leave me

Always hold me.

Stay Close by my side

Forever more.

 

Don't ever leave my

My darling I love you.

For eternity

Forevermore

 

© Copyright Jan 30th 2016 11:00 A.M. All Rights Reserved

Larry Gordon Killam (SOCAN/ASCAP)

(;Yrral Mallik Publishing;)

Larry G. Killam


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Gavin
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04/01/2020 2:49 pm  

I like the simple structure and sentiment. Do you think maybe it could benefit from a chorus or a bridge?

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AllfortheLord
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05/01/2020 6:48 pm  

I've searched for so long for someone like you to come along in my life

I wished and I hoped under the bright stars of Heaven at  night

then when you came I knew all's well you were the livin proof

ohh darlin this is what I'm saying to you...

(chorus)

Don't ever leave me.

Don't ever go.

Stay close beside me

the full length of my road

help me thru good times
those that are lean

Stay here forever

For eternity.


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YrralMallik
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Topic starter 06/01/2020 9:57 am  

@gavin

It now has a Chorus Thanks.

Larry G. Killam


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YrralMallik
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Topic starter 06/01/2020 9:58 am  

@allforthelord

Really like Da Chorus.Thanks!!!

Larry G. Killam


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AllfortheLord
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06/01/2020 10:52 am  

yw hope it finds music singer


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YrralMallik
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Topic starter 06/01/2020 11:08 am  

@allforthelord

Me too.Got to send it to my co-writer.

 

Larry G. Killam


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