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Bird in a Cage


ckiphen
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Bird in a cage

Verse

I’m trying to heal my wounded heart

But seeing you makes it hard.

Been thinking bout changing scenery

And breaking free of these bars.

Pre chorus

Bird in a cage, bird in a cage.

I dream of flying away.

Up in the sky, up in the sky

I dream of flying away.

Chorus

I want more I want to soar.

I long to be free.

I want to be me.

Bridge

I Love you but you smother me.

You take my freedom away.

If I don’t leave you, I’ll hate you.

Forgive me if I don’t stay.

Verse

I’m trying my wings, my broken wings

But flying’s hard in a cage.

I’ve been dreaming bout leaving lately

And going it my own way.

Pre chorus

Bird in a cage, bird in a cage.

I dream of flying away.

Up in the sky, up in the sky

Flying somewhere far away.

Chorus

I want more I want to soar.

I long to be free.

I want to be me.

Bridge

I Love you but you smother me.

You take my freedom away.

If I don’t leave you, I’ll hate you.

Forgive me if I don’t stay.

Tag

Don’t wanna be, don’t wanna be

A bird in a cage.

carroll kiphen


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YrralMallik
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Set me free

Set me free

Please set me free

I'm a bird in a cage.

Do you know how I feel

Please set me free Please!!!!!

Larry G. Killam


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ckiphen
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Where do you feel these lines should be used?

 

carroll kiphen


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YrralMallik
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Not sure.Keep or Sweep my friend.

 

Larry G. Killam


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Guy E. Trepanier
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Suggestion

Swap pre chorus and chorus

Have fun!

 

K.I.S.S. Keep It Simple and Singable
https://www.soundclick.com/bands3/default.cfm?bandID=588312
https://soundcloud.com/guyetrep : in English (my voice + ukulele)
https://soundcloud.com/guyechante : en Français (in french)
https://soundcloud.com/user-380042223 : songs with lyricists
https://www.reverbnation.com/control_room/artist/1969477/songs


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ckiphen
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Think you sre probably right.

carroll kiphen


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ckiphen
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Think you sre probably right. Needs a slight rewrite.

carroll kiphen


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