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ckiphen
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An American Beauty

Verse

I can’t help but notice.

I can’t help but smile.

You’re the most gorgeous girl

I’ve seen in a while.

Chorus

I have to tip my hat to beautiful.

I’ve never seen such blue eyes.

You’re a long stemmed American beauty

Worthy of a grand prize.

Verse

I can’t keep from saying

Love your big blue eyes.

I’m a fool for thinking

That you could be mine.

Chorus

I have to tip my hat to beautiful.

I’ve never seen such blue eyes.

You’re a long stemmed American beauty

Worthy of a grand prize.

Verse

I know that I’m dreaming.

I know it’s no use

To think a county boy

Could get thru to you.

Chorus

I have to tip my hat to beautiful.

I’ve never seen such blue eyes.

You’re a long stemmed American beauty

Worthy of a grand prize.

Bridge

You’re absolutely amazing.

A vision to behold.

You’re an American beauty.

You’re one beautiful rose.

 

carroll kiphen


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NEIL COTTON
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I hope she likes the compliments 🙂


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AllfortheLord
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very nice I heard the music to it all the way only 1 place would I change it on the bridge 

Bridge

You’re absolutely amazing.

A vision to behold, behold , behold.....

You’re an American beauty.

one beautiful rose.


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Gavin
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Nice! I like the way the focus remains on one very simple message ' "You're so beautiful" - all the way through. Well, almost...

If I were you, I would remove this verse, and replace it with something else.

I know that I’m dreaming.

I know it’s no use

To think a county boy

Could get thru to you.

There's nothing wrong with it, but it takes the focus off the lady and onto the singer. It narrows its applicability. Without it, the song could be sung by any man to a woman he sees as beautiful - a girlfriend, wife or, as here, an unattainable object of desire.

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AllfortheLord
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An American Beauty

Verse

I can’t help but notice.

I can’t help but smile.

You’re the best lookin thing

I’ve seen in quite a while.

Chorus

I have to tip my hat to beautiful.

I’ve never seen such radiant shine

You’re a long stemmed American beauty

Worthy of a grand prize.

Verse

I can’t keep from saying

I Love your big blue eyes.

I’m a fool for thinking

That you could be mine. so

Chorus

I have to tip my hat to beautiful.

I’ve never seen such radiant shine

You’re a long stemmed American beauty

Worthy of a grand prize

Bridge

You’re absolutely amazing.

A vision to behold.

You’re an American beauty.

You’re one beautiful rose.


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ckiphen
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On a long road trip. Sorry for. Not replying.

carroll kiphen


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