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JAPOV
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21/01/2020 4:26 am  

Finally got around to this one... 🙂

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Beyond understanding
Without mortal bounds
A calm for the soul
A symphony without sound

A glimpse of eternity
A universe of mind
A choir for the deaf
Sunlight for the blind

An uncommon yearning
This unyielding desire
To know where I belong
But… it’s a subtle fire

A solace of spirit
A meaningful life
A service of praise
Is no sacrifice

An assurance of purpose
A time for release
What I find in a prayer
Is a shared silent peace

An uncommon yearning
This unyielding desire
To know where I belong
But… it’s a subtle fire

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ckiphen
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21/01/2020 10:32 am  

Use it or lose it:

Subtle flame

Verse

It’s an uncommon yearning

It’s a burning desire

This feeling of belonging.

Is but a subtle fire.

Pre chorus

Beyond comprehension

Without mortal bounds.

It’s a calm in the soul.

To know what I’ve found.

Chorus

Call it faith or religion

I give it no name.

But I know that it’s burning

This subtle fire.

Verse

Universal, eternal

The beginning the end.

An assurance of purpose

On which I can depend.

Pre chorus

Beyond comprehension

Without mortal bounds.

brings a calm to my soul.

To know what I’ve found.

Chorus

Call it faith or religion

I give it no name.

But I know that it’s burning

This subtle flame.

Bridge

On cold winter nights

It keeps my soul warm.

It provides me light.

When life is a storm.

 

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JAPOV
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21/01/2020 10:55 am  

I like it CK! It’s always interesting to see other's interpretations... especially when you’re trying to describe a feeling   😎 

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ckiphen
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21/01/2020 1:09 pm  

Thought it'd be easier to put music to it. Just a thought.

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JAPOV
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21/01/2020 2:43 pm  

Yea, work in progress... That’s always cool. Perhaps we’ll inspire someone else.
BTW... "All You Get Is Me" is the first track on Deplorable. I put your name first as writer 😎

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ckiphen
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21/01/2020 3:20 pm  

Hey cool! I appreciate it!

 

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JAPOV
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26/09/2020 3:07 am  

https://www.soundclick.com/music/songInfo.cfm?songID=14117615

🙂

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ckiphen
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26/09/2020 8:10 am  

Very cool.

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Gavin
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27/09/2020 11:44 am  

Very nicely done. The mood of the music really matches the lyric well. And it's a really good lyric.

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JAPOV
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27/09/2020 8:28 pm  

Not too "preachy" 🙂

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01/10/2020 3:46 pm  

(:ROCK ON:)

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JAPOV
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03/10/2020 8:11 pm  
Posted by: @yrralmallik

(:ROCK ON:)

Lol... It's interesting you say that Larry. Lately I've been exploring alternatives 🙂

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ckiphen
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03/10/2020 8:40 pm  

That's how we grow! 

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