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27/10/2020 11:53 am
To The One Who's Left Behind
This song is for the one who's left behind.
She dreams of you with all her might.
He swears he'll never find another.
They share the times that use to be.
To the one who's left behind.
There is a way to hang on to those dreams
To the one wh's left behind.
This song is for the one who's left behind.
He swears he'll never find another.
Another you is all he wants in his life.
He misses you so very much.
They miss each other so much it hurts.
To the one who's left behind.
There is a way to hang on to those dreams
To the one wh's left behind.
(C) Copyright 2020 Oct.27 11:00 A.M.
Larry Gordon Killam (SOCAN/ASCAP)
Yrral Mallik Publisher
Larry G. Killam
27/10/2020 7:20 pm
You seem to be switching from the second to the third person almost at random, which is confusing. Also, nobody dreams with all their might. You're asleep LOL. I think this one could use a little work, Larry 🙂
On the other hand, I could just be missing the point, which would not be unusual for me.
I may or may not be an enigma
http://mysteriousbeings.com
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