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27/05/2020 4:29 pm
Sister Witch And Sister Bitch
The circus came to town
But it was the weidest place to hold it.
In a board room of the Hospital.
A three ring circus to behold.
Sister bitch with a bat in her hair.
Sister witchstirred her brew.
The caldron had every mixture of poison.
Hatred and jealousy filled their heart.
Sister witch yealled out a laugh
That would chill you to the bone
A million demons danced around the table.
The battle was on they gave it their best shot
Spewing out hatred tongues of fire
But the Dr. seen right though them
He got up and called my little sister
And I followed right behind them
But in the third ring was the Holy Ghost
He called them by their names And said
You God fearing women that your not
The battle is mind and I will win.
You should of been there the day
That Sister witch and sister bitch tried to cast their spell
Don't be afraid to call them for who they are.
Stand up in the name of love and be brave my friend.
If sister witch and sister bitch should try to take control
Go in the Holy Spirit and tell it the way it is
Be bold and don't let them take control
Beware of sister witch and sister bitch
They're only fooling themselves
Let love rule the situation
And it will all work out for the best.
© Copyright Sept 15th 2016
10:30 A.M. All Rights Reserved
Larry Gordon Killam (SOCAN/ASCAP)
(;Yrral Mallik Publishing;)
Larry G. Killam
28/05/2020 12:31 am
Hello Larry, I understand Gavins consternation. I understand that you write the lyrics and you need someone to compose the music, as well as someone to sing the song. This lyric does not seem to have any structure, rhyme, or continuity to the story line. Composers and singers need this to do their job. It would help if you could describe what genre you want for this lyric, try to develop a progressing story line, incorporate rhyme, and come up with a memorable and repeatable hook. Collaborators will be more willing to work with you, and your target audience will pay attention if you can do these things. Good luck and best wishes,
Speak soon
Music is an international language, say it with a song. deaconmusic4u@gmail.com
28/05/2020 3:24 am
Oh, come on guys... This is obviously a story about two "Twisted Sisters" doing sex re-assignment operations on adolescents...
… lol
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28/05/2020 10:39 pm
Hello Larry, That is actually a real good choice, early 70's was full of some great bands and styles, glitter rock, shock rock, mainstream rock. Your lyric might fit into the style of Alice Cooper, Ozzy Osbourne and Black Sabbath, or Judas Priest, shock rock bands. The lyric would have to be parred down some, most of the lyrics in that era weren't super complicated and were some what dark. Take a listen of some of these bands and decide if that is what you want. Good luck and best wishes,
Speak soon
Music is an international language, say it with a song. deaconmusic4u@gmail.com
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31/05/2020 7:40 pm
Yes I was kind of thinking Alice Cooper Thanks for giving it a look over my friend.
Larry G. Killam
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