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Ringtone ~ Looking for music and singer THANKS !!!!!!!!!


YrralMallik
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Ringtone

All I hear is a ringtone.
When I answer the phone.
It seems there's no one there.
Whoever you are you got me upset.
Just answer the phone.
There's no need to be rude.

What to do about this ringtone.
When I answer the phone.
Do you know what your doing to me.
Why don't you help me.
There's no need to be rude.
There's only a ring tone.

All I hear is a ring tone.
Why are you be so cruel.
Please tell me who you are.
Just answer the phone.
There's no need to be rude.

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Larry Gordon Killam (SOCAN/ASCAP)

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Larry G. Killam


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Gavin
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Larry, I'm not sure this makes sense. Is the singer the one who calls or answers? In the first verse he's doing both. You don't get a ring tone when you answer the phone. At least it's never happened to me.

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Deacon
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Hello Larry,  I've read this several times and I have to agree with Gav, it is a little confusing.  Seriously, if you replaced "Ringtone"  with "Nothing", it might make a little more sense.  Thank you for sharing, good luck and best wishes,

Speak soon

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YrralMallik
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Thanks for giving it a look at guys much appreciated.

Larry G. Killam


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