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ckiphen
(@ckiphen)
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Can’t make me fall out of love

 

Verse

I’ve been thinking bout you all day long

Trying to write a song.

I’ve been drinking but the guilt hangs on

Fighting to right my wrong.

Chorus

I don’t know if this is a love song

Or if it is the blues.

Love me, hate me but you can’t make me

Fall out of love with you.

Verse

I’ve been calling but you don’t pick up

Hoping to right my wrong.

I’ve been writing but something sounds off.

Listening to this song.

Chorus

I don’t know if this is a love song

Or if it is the blues.

Love me, hate me but you can’t make me

Fall out of love with you.

Bridge

I was stupid I was stubborn

Needed to prove you wrong.

We had a fight now you are gone.

This is my goodbye song.

Verse

I’ve been thinking bout you all day long

Trying to write a song.

I’ve been drinking but the guilt hangs on

Fighting to right my wrong.

Chorus

I don’t know if this is a love song

Or if it is the blues.

Love me, hate me but you can’t make me

Fall out of love with you.

 

 

carroll kiphen


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Jenny Stokes
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Posts: 539
 

Hey Carroll. I'm not picking up any new projects at the moment, but I thought I'd just make a wee comment (despite the lyric being obviously done). The line "Love me, hate me, but you can't make me fall out of love with you" is a real gem. I think the catchiest part of it is "love me, hate me" and I wonder if that might be a more unique title. The downside, of course, is that "love me, hate me" doesn't sum up the subject, but as click bait, it certainly would suggest intrigue awaits the clicker. 

J

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http://evansandstokes.com
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Deacon
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Posts: 284
 

Jen brought up a good point Carroll, how about, "(Can't Make Me) Fall Out of Love", or "Can't Make Me (Fall Out of Love)", as well as Jens suggestion.  Best wishes,

Speak soon

Music is an international language, say it with a song. deaconmusic4u@gmail.com


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ckiphen
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Thanks guys

carroll kiphen


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Guy E. Trepanier
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Hi Carroll, I have composed a melody for this lyric. Do whatever you want with it. If you don't like, just ignore it.

Links to the song:

uke: https://app.box.com/s/5rty2o3mo25twytzyty8010shih66uuy
mp3: https://app.box.com/s/v9wwhmhohei9moexmppthrf9j32s5qy4
pdf: https://app.box.com/s/40g2zmlaklmnp0o9tkh5b1qq115uyuma

Can’t make me fall out of love (#480)
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
© Lyrics: Carroll Kiphen, 2020.
© Melody: Guy E. Trepanier, 2020.

Intro: 8 bars (key of G, 6/8, tempo:96)

(I)8_.5_6/(III7)7_.~'/(IV)6_.4_./(V7)5_.~'/
(I)8_.5_6/(III7)7_.~'/(IV)6_.(V7)5_./(I)1_.~'/

(I)I’ve been thinking /(III7)bout you / (5_35_3/7_.5#_'/) < verse 12
(IV)all day /(V7)long / (6_.4_./5_.~'/)
(IV)Trying to write a /(V7)song / (6646_4/2_.~'/)
(I)I’ve been drinking /(III7)but the guilt / (5_35_3/7_65#_'/)
(IV)hangs /(V7)on / (6_.~'/5_.~'/)
(IV)Fighting to right my /(V7)wrong (6646_4/7_.~)

I /(I)don’t know if this is a /(V7)love song / (5/878383/9_.7_'/) < chorus 10
(IV)Or if it is the /(III7)blues / (8_6868/7_.~'/)
(IV)Love me, hate me /(III7)but you can’t make me / (6_46_4/7_5#797/)
(IV)Fall out of /(V7)love with /(I)you /(V7) / (8_.6_8/7_.5_./8_.~'/~'~'/)

(I)I’ve been calling /(III7)but you / (5_35_3/7_.5#_'/) < verse
(IV)don’t pick /(V7)up / (6_.4_./2_.~'/)
(IV)Hoping to right my /(V7)wrong / (6646_4/5_.~'/)
(I)I’ve been writing /(III7)but something / (5_35_3/7_65#_'/)
(IV)sounds /(V7)off / (6_.~'/5_.~'/)
(IV)Listening to this /song (6646_4/7_.~)

Chorus 10

(3m)I was stupid I /was stubborn / (7537_5/7_57_'/) < bridge 8
(2m)Needed to prove you /(V7)wrong / (6456_4/5_.~'/)
(3m)We had a fight now /you are gone / (7537_5/7_57_'/)
(2m)This is my goodbye /(V7)song / (6456_4/7_.~'/)

Interlude: 8 bars (repeat intro)

(I)I’ve been thinking /(III7)bout you / (5_35_3/7_.5#_'/) < verse 12
(IV)all day /(V7)long / (6_.4_./5_.~'/)
(IV)Trying to write a /(V7)song / (6646_4/2_.~'/)
(I)I’ve been drinking /(III7)but the guilt / (5_35_3/7_65#_'/)
(IV)hangs /(V7)on / (6_.~'/5_.~'/)
(IV)Fighting to right my /(V7)wrong (6646_4/7_.~)

Chorus 10
(III7)No, you can’t make me / (7_5#797/)
(IV)Fall out of /(V7)love with /(I)you / (8_.6_8/7_.9_./8_.~'/)
_ /

Can’t make me fall out of love   (#480)
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
© Lyrics: Carroll Kiphen, 2020.
© Melody: Guy E. Trepanier, 2020.

Intro: 8 bars (key of G, 6/8)

I’ve been thinking bout you all day long
Trying to write a song
I’ve been drinking but the guilt hangs on
Fighting to right my wrong

I don’t know if this is a love song
Or if it is the blues
Love me, hate me but you can’t make me
Fall out of love with you ...

I’ve been calling but you don’t pick up
Hoping to right my wrong
I’ve been writing but something sounds off
Listening to this song

I don’t know if this is a love song
Or if it is the blues
Love me, hate me but you can’t make me
Fall out of love with you ...

I was stupid I was stubborn
Needed to prove you wrong
We had a fight now you are gone
This is my goodbye song

Interlude: 8 bars

I’ve been thinking bout you all day long
Trying to write a song
I’ve been drinking but the guilt hangs on
Fighting to right my wrong

I don’t know if this is a love song
Or if it is the blues
Love me, hate me but you can’t make me
Fall out of love with you ...

No, you can’t make me
Fall out of love with you

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Have fun!

 

K.I.S.S. Keep It Simple and Singable
https://www.soundclick.com/bands3/default.cfm?bandID=588312
https://soundcloud.com/guyetrep : in English (my voice + ukulele)
https://soundcloud.com/guyechante : en Français (in french)
https://soundcloud.com/user-380042223 : songs with lyricists
https://www.reverbnation.com/control_room/artist/1969477/songs


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