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Nelly Tharwat
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29/04/2019 2:25 am  

Hello everyone,

I need music for this lyric

Title: Old Ring       copyright 2019 by Nelly Tharwat. All Rights Reserved.

Chorus 1:

I need his money. He needs my love      9
It's the only way, I'll reach the clouds above     11
I do every sweet and seductive thing      10
To wrap him 'round my finger like a ring      10
Till he's broke and knows that he’s been played     9
Then I'll throw that old ring away      8

Verse 1:

Three months have passed as a beautiful dream      10
I pretend he is my only love      9
And he's sent from heaven above     8
He bought me a car and pays my rent.   9
I count down the days to win my game.  9
Count down the days to reach my aim     8

Pre -Chorus 1:

When I look into his eyes      7
I know he still believes my lies     8

Chorus 1:

I need his money. He needs my love      9
It's the only way, I'll reach the clouds above    11
I do every sweet and seductive thing     10
To wrap him 'round my finger like a ring      10
Till he's broke and knows that he’s been played     9
Then I'll throw that old ring away      8

Verse 2:

My boyfriend left me for someone else        10
He broke my heart, let a deep wound in         9
I thought the rich man's turn should begin     9
To replace him and mend my heart      8
But he said;"I ain't that kind of man,      9
I discovered your evil plan     8

Pre-Chorus 2:

When he looked into my eyes     7
I felt ashamed of my old lies      8

Chorus 2:

I need his love. He has a new love     9
I thought I'd be able, to reach the clouds above    12
I lost every sweet and precious thing     10
I fell and broke like an Old Ring      8
I lost love, money and everything      9
Even my Old Ring, Even my Old Ring     10

Coda:

SPOKEN:
I couldn't reach the clouds above
I lost money, love and everything
I lost money, love and everything
Even my Old Ring
I lost everything
Even my Old Ring
Even my Old Ring
My Old Ring
Old Ring

This topic was modified 7 months ago by Nelly Tharwat

Reaching the top is so hard but not impossible.


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Lucien
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03/06/2019 1:38 pm  
  • Hello! My name is Lucien. I am a composer, vocalist and i have a beautiful voice.
    I'm looking for music makers, composers, arrangers to write a beautiful song that people will heard at all the world.
    Write to my email address who is interested. Beautiful music always touches the hearts of the audience!
    Lucien.Sur@gmail.com

     

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Mick Standing
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28/07/2019 4:46 am  

Watch this bloke called Inna who's real name is Lucien Sur because i contacted him through his email address which is at the bottom of his comment he makes no comment on the lyric by Nelly and he sent me an email reply asking for my lyrics and i told him.

If we do collaborate together I always do 50/50 copyright do you agree with that?

This was his reply 

My name is Lucien, I am a vocalist.  I wanted to write a song for Eurovision but I was not taken into the authors of this song.  I sing only covers.  So the 50/50 revenue sharing would bring us nothing.  I am from Moscow, Russia.  We can try to write a song, and I will buy poems from you if it is not expensive and if I will like the your poems.

Lucien

Then I replied

When you agree to 50/50 copyright then I will send you something.

His reply

I want to disappoint you) It will not happen!))

My reply

I don’t like being ripped off so fuck off.

Since this he has bombarded me with emails like this.

I didn’t like your poems ..

 And I didn’t like that you want to get rich on my talent .. 

It’s easier for me to buy  poems for $ 50 in America than from a depressive whiner from Australia.

So shut your mouth and get out of here !!

My reply

What talent???????? What poems??????? I didn’t give you shit. You are a rip off artist who can’t write English lyrics and who thinks he can buy someone so again fuck off

Anyway i think you get the picture that's all i have to say if anybody here wants to sell lyrics to him for $50 that is your business but does that then give him permission to use them without you having any copyright??? I have never met anyone like this before in fact everybody that i have collaborated with has agreed to 50/50 copyright.

 

 


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Mick Standing
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28/07/2019 4:55 pm  

And his emails keep coming here is what i got this morning and I didn't give him ANY lyrics so i have no idea what he is saying but i think this is just harassment. 

Mick

You are a strange boy who was offended that his poems did not like.  Are there no musicians in Australia who didn't buy your poems?  It obviously disturbs you.  But leave me alone, today I found great poems for a beautiful track.  Sorry, but you should think about yourself and not about me.  I'm sorry..


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piq
 piq
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28/07/2019 5:20 pm  

lets face it , whenever you tell someone to ''f&$k off'' ,  9 times out of 10 , it dosent usually end well . i think you probably couldve avoided this mess , by being a bit more diplomatic , by writing him a simple '' thanks , but no thanks '' message . youre probably right about him , so it dosent make much sense to carry on replying to him , so the best thing you can do is to just block him , or ignore him . 


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Mick Standing
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28/07/2019 6:12 pm  

Yeah that's good advise pig i won't post anything else that he sends me i'll just ignore it.


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Lucien
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29/07/2019 7:16 am  

Hey. My name is Lucien Sur. I'm a vocalist. I was searching music makers. A certain Mick Standing wrote to me in the mail, and very aggressively began to offer his poems and his own conditions. I explained to him that first I need to see his work. He sent me his poems and audio track. It was disgusting .. Punk music, punk style .. For me it was unacceptable. I wrote that I do not need his services, and I am not interested in making music with him, more than 50/50. Upon hearing this, he began to insult me ​​and say that I am a bad musician and that he does not consider me talented. He also said that he is giving me time to change my mind and he will write to me later, to which I replied that this would not happen!!! Hearing this, he again began to insult me!
I think he is not a very healthy person, be careful!
A vain attempt to destroy my reputation.

Everything that Mick Standing has written is a lie and an attempt to destroy my reputation. maybe, this happened because Michael is still a young musician, and failures hurt his heart.

Love each other! Peace for everyone!

Lucien Sur

Poem MIK STANDING:

We’re Gonna Rock © by M. Standing & C. Stewart 2016

 

Chorus

We’re gonna rock coz we’re out on parole

We’re gonna shake this joint and take control

We ain’t no gimmick here we are rock & roll

Stand up and take it baby rock your soul

 

Verse1

We got the Marshalls and we got the stack

We got the attitude we got it back

We got no rumba and we got no ska

We got no jazz it’s who we are

 

Verse 2

We got the gear and we got the jack

We got the women and got the rack

We got the drugs yeah got the smack

We got the road and we got ya back

 

Chorus

We’re gonna rock coz we’re out on parole

We’re gonna shake this joint and take control

We ain’t no gimmick here we are rock & roll

Stand up and take it baby rock your soul

 

Bridge

Killer drums and pumping bass

Drive it through and out ya face

Valve amps distorted sound

Nail ya to the fuckin’ ground

 

Verse 3

We got the whiskey and we got the pot

Took a toke and we had a shot

We got the mission and we got the crew

It’s bloody loud all for you

 

Verse 4

We got flying V’s and Les Paul’s

Got local pubs and dance halls

The chicks are mad lads are dull

See ya next week at the skull

 

Chorus

We’re gonna rock coz we’re out on parole

We’re gonna shake this joint and take control

We ain’t no gimmick here we are rock & roll

Stand up and take it baby rock your soul


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Mick Standing
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29/07/2019 7:25 am  

Liar


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Songwriter Junction
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30/07/2019 11:13 am  

Lucien, the correct way to seek collaborators for your music would be to start a new topic here in the Collaborate section, not to add your request on Nelly's thread. You are more likely to get responses and not get in the way of Nelly's request. Please feel free to start a new thread. I will then remove all the posts here, except for Nelly's original post. Might I also suggest that you post a brief introduction in the Introductions section. People are more likely to want to collaborate with someone if they know a little about him.

Mick, I hope you understand that this is Nelly's thread, and it's probably best if I remove everyone else's posts.

For what it's worth, I like that lyric, even if it doesn't suit Lucien. Also, I checked out Lucien's YouTube videos. He does have a great voice.


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Guy E. Trepanier
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07/08/2019 6:54 pm  

Hi Nelly,

I have put some music on your lyrics OLD RING. Here is the result.
You can do what you want with it. If you don't like, just ignore it.

Hereafter, some files that you can download.

Instrumental (basic arrangement): mp3
box link: https://app.box.com/s/c6knibaolknvxxg1dvd7lbavx87j1kbp

Lead sheet music of the song: pdf file
box link: https://app.box.com/s/a0x9e4mon1a893c2htylrhj10cife0o4

My singing of the song (my voice + ukulele): mp3
box link: https://app.box.com/s/9pe145o39azavqm6sekb7ohm5eoug3rz

My singing is not very good. With a good female singer and a good musician, it could work well.

My Old Ring
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ (2:55, tempo: 112)
© Lyrics: Nelly Tharwat, April 2019.
© Melody: Guy E. Trepanier, August 2019.

Intro: 4 bars (key of D) chords: I=D, V7=A7, IV=G

(I)3_1_3_12/3__~~/(V7)4_2_7_27/(I)1__~~/

(I)Three months have passed as a /beautiful dream / (1_113_11/331_3_~/) <== v 16
(V7)I still pretend he's my /only love / (2_772_77/2_7_2_~/)
(I)And he is sent from /heaven above / (1_113_1_/3_113_~/)
(V7)He bought me a car and /(I)pays my rent / (42772_7_/1_3_1_~/)
(IV)I count down the days to /(I)win my game / (4_1_4141/3_1_3_~/)
(V7)Count down the days to /(I)reach my aim / (2_772_7_/1_3_1_~/)
(IV)When I look into his /(I)eyes (4_1_4141/5__~')
I /(V7)know he still believes my /(I)lies (3/27272_7_/1__~')

I /(I)need his money. He /needs my love / (1/5_3_553_/5_3_1_~/) <== ch 16
(V7)It's the only way, I'll reach the /clouds above (42724272/4_2_4_')
I /(I)do every sweet and /seductive thing (2/5_315_3_/553_1_')
To /(V7)wrap him 'round my finger /(I)like a ring / (3/42724_2_/1_3_1_~/)
(IV)Till he's broke and knows /(I)that he’s been played / (6_4_6_64/5_531_~/)
(V7)Then I'll throw that /(I)old ring away / (4_2_4_2_/3_135_ /)
(IV)Till he's broke and knows /(I)that he’s been played / (6_4_6_64/5_531_~/)
(V7)Then I'll throw that /(I)old ring away / (4_2_4_2_/3_131_ /)

Instrumental: 8 bars
(I)3_1_3_12/3__~~/(V7)4_2_7_27/(I)3__~~/
(I)3_1_3_12/3__~~/(V7)4_2_7_27/(I)1__~~/

(I)My boyfriend left me /for someone else / (1_1_3_11/3_113_~/) <== v 16
(V7)He broke my heart, let a /deep wound in / (2_772_77/2_7_2_~/)
(I)I thought the rich man's /turn should begin / (1_113_1_/3_113_~/)
(V7)To replace him quick and /(I)mend my heart / (42772_7_/1_3_1_~/)
(IV)But he said: "I ain't that /(I)kind of man / (4_1_4141/3_1_3_~/)
(V7)I discovered your /(I)evil plan" / (2_772_7_/1_3_1_~/)
(IV)When he looked into my /(I)eyes / (4_1_4141/5__~')
I /(V7)felt ashamed of my old /(I)lies (3/27272_7_/1__~')

I /(I)need his love. He /has a new love (1/5_3_5_3_/553_1_~/) <== ch 16
I /(V7)thought I'd be able, to reach the /clouds above (3/42724272/4_2_4_')
I /(I)lost every sweet and /precious thing (2/5_315_3_/5_3_1_')
I /(V7)fell and now I'm broke like a /(I)poor old ring / (3/42724_27/1_3_1_~/)
(IV)I lost love, money /(I)and everything / (6_4_6_64/5_531_~/)
(V7)Even my old ring, /(I)even my old ring / (42724_~/31315_~/)
(IV)I lost love, money /(I)and everything / (6_4_6_64/5_531_~/)
(V7)Even my old ring, /(I)even my old ring / (42724_~/31321_~/)

(V7)Even my old ring, /(I)even my old ring / (42724_~/31321_~/)
(V7)My Old /(I)Ring /_ / (4__2__/1__~~/_ /)

= = = = = =

My Old Ring
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
© Lyrics: Nelly Tharwat, April 2019.
© Melody: Guy E. Trepanier, August 2019.

Intro: 4 bars (key of D)

Three months have passed as a beautiful dream
I still pretend he's my only love
And he is sent from heaven above
He bought me a car and pays my rent
I count down the days to win my game
Count down the days to reach my aim
When I look into his eyes
I know he still believes my lies

I need his money. He needs my love
It's the only way I'll reach the clouds above
I do every sweet and seductive thing
To wrap him 'round my finger like a ring
Till he's broke and knows that he’s been played
Then I'll throw that old ring away
Till he's broke and knows that he’s been played
Then I'll throw that old ring away

Instrumental: 8 bars

My boyfriend left me for someone else
He broke my heart, let a deep wound in
I thought the rich man's turn should begin
To replace him quick and mend my heart
But he said: "I ain't that kind of man
I discovered your evil plan"
When he looked into my eyes
I felt ashamed of my old lies

I need his love. He has a new love
I thought I'd be able to reach the clouds above
I lost every sweet and precious thing
I fell and now I'm broke like a poor Old Ring
I lost love, money and everything
Even my old ring, even my old ring
I lost love, money and everything
Even my old ring, even my old ring

Even my old ring, even my old ring
My Old Ring

= = = = = =

Have fun!

Guy E. Trepanier

 

This post was modified 3 months ago 2 times by Guy E. Trepanier

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Nelly Tharwat
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18/08/2019 12:00 pm  

Hi Guy,
Sorry for my late reply - i was away from the forum- , 

Good music! 

I like your singing in the Pre-Chorus

"Happy melody with sad lyrics" That's what I felt when I heard it.. I didn't expect that..

This post was modified 3 months ago by Nelly Tharwat

Reaching the top is so hard but not impossible.


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Nelly Tharwat
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18/08/2019 12:30 pm  

In this song you should put the Chorus in the beginning TO LET the audience know her aim and the game that she wants to win in the V1.

I had submitted another version of this lyrics into a songwriting contest ( genre; lyrics Only ) I received the Runner Up
placement by the way.

 

This post was modified 3 months ago by Nelly Tharwat

Reaching the top is so hard but not impossible.


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Nelly Tharwat
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20/08/2019 4:15 am  

Please check your PM. Guy!

Reaching the top is so hard but not impossible.


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Songwriter Junction
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01/09/2019 9:47 am  

Larry,

You have accidentally posted this lyric on Nelly's thread. Can you re-post it as a new topic, either here in the Collaborate forum or in the Lyrics Library forum, whichever you would like? When you have done that, I'll remove it from here.


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ckiphen
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09/11/2019 2:10 pm  

Sorry! Just remove it. Please

carroll kiphen


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