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YrralMallik
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Helen Waite

V-1

We'd had a lovers quarrel.
Said you don't love me anymore.
You mentioned another man...
You said I was too boring.
Said I'd wait till you changed your mind.
You said go to hell en' wait...

Chorus

SO I MADE A TRIP THAT NIGHT
To Helen Waite AGAIN.
A PLACE WHERE SPARKS ARE ALWAYS FLYING
AND IF I GET THERE BY TEN

PASSION WILL BE FLAMING
BEHIND THE OPEN GATE
SO WHEN I'M WANTING AND HURTING
I go to Helen Waite.
I go I go to Helen Waite.

V-2

I'D Met THIS WOMAN at the Dinner Bell.
We'D talked and talked for hours.
I told her everything you said.
When I asked her her name.
I just about felled off my chair.
We laughed and laughed ABOUT FOOLISH LOVE.

Repeat Chorus [starting with GLAD I MADE THE TRIP THAT NIGHT]

V-3

When you told me goodbye...
I was hit by a barb wire fence.
Was it fate or coincidence.
Over at the Dinner Bell.
You wonder if there's ever a chance...
That I might come back to you.

Bridge

Fat chance in Hell.
Are you crazy....
Man I'm over you.
I took your advice and.

Chorus (starting with NOW I GO THERE EVERY NIGHT]

Outra

Well I took your advice.
Where do I go when I need love.
I go I go to Helen Waite.
She aint no ten but a nine will do.
Her burning love is an open gate.
Wait here she comes now.
Please meet Helen Waite
Please meet Helen Waite.

(C)-Copyright-2006-Larry Killam (SOCAN)

(;Yrral Mallik Publishing;)

Larry G. Killam


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Gavin
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Hey Larry. You are the king of catchy hook ideas. Helen Waite - I love it! Having said that, I think it could be tightened up. Why is he going to Helen Waite AGAIN - has he been before? What is the significance of getting there by 10, other than rhyming with again? A brief description of Helen's charms would be nice. Also, a funny song really benefits from rhyme, in my opinion.

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YrralMallik
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@gavin

Thanks for giving it a look at Much Appreciated my friend.

Larry G. Killam


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