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31/10/2021 5:45 pm
I think I've finally got this right... ?
https://www.soundclick.com/music/songInfo.cfm?songID=14336371
The whisky lost its savor, the couch offers no rest
Cigarettes don't feel right anymore
No reason to argue, no weight upon my chest
Since I packed my bags and hit the door
Seems like something's missing without your complaining
But my soul says there's nothing wrong
Freedoms intuition is choosing my direction
My rearview doesn't point where I belong
I've traded all my memories for a little bit of sanity
A foolish waste of time for peace of mind
Dreams are just desire failing to let hope set sail
I no longer have the heart to be unkind
Goodbye's the only mercy I can find
Faded pictures of a day, your touch would give me courage
I haven't felt so hopeful in a while
Time is a cruel teacher, now it's plain to see
So much naivety in a smile
The road leads me away, chasing down the day
Blue skies encourage me to roam
No reason to feel guilty for nothing left to say
Or never feeling like I was home
https://www.soundclick.com/artist/default.cfm?bandid=1449856
31/10/2021 6:40 pm
Love it. Such a full sound, and the lyric is great.
You seem a bit unsure of where to go with your voice at the end of this line, which is obviously an important one, not just lyrically but as the last line and the only one that's repeated..
Goodbye's the only mercy I can find
I would go up on the word "find" each time. Or maybe the first and third time.
Great stuff.
I may or may not be an enigma
http://mysteriousbeings.com
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31/10/2021 7:10 pm
You're right lol... I'm using some odd chords there so I am sorta' fishing. I can hear what you're saying though, at least on the last repeat for a little "attitude"! ?
https://www.soundclick.com/artist/default.cfm?bandid=1449856
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