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16/05/2020 9:50 pm
Every mother loves and every father hopes
The future will surpass yesterday's glory
But hope will never wait for time to stand still
You have to make this moment your story
Don't hesitate, procrastinate
You can't delay
You're fate's appointment, seize the moment
Don't let it slip away
Make the change
Be the ones who live the dream
Don't be afraid
The world is smaller than it seems
Seize the day
Don't be a slave to the machine
Make the change
All of us were born to learn from our mistakes
But nature lends itself to complacency
Own the wisdom of these past generations
No excuses will correct the urgency
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16/05/2020 9:53 pm
Good so far. What are you thinking the hook will be.
carroll kiphen
16/05/2020 9:54 pm
Needs something stronger than the title.
carroll kiphen
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16/05/2020 10:33 pm
What'cha thinkin...?
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16/05/2020 10:50 pm
Seize the moment is a stronger hook.
chorus
Don't hesitate, procrastinate
Don't you delay.
Sieze the moment, seize the moment.
Don't let it slip away
carroll kiphen
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16/05/2020 10:53 pm
Actually, that's not a bad pre-chorus... 🙂
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16/05/2020 10:55 pm
Just something in it to break it up and add a bit of musical contrast.
carroll kiphen
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16/05/2020 11:08 pm
And it lends urgency to the message... I like it! 🙂
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16/05/2020 11:09 pm
Glad to add a bit.
carroll kiphen
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16/05/2020 11:11 pm
Now, if only you could sing... lol
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16/05/2020 11:21 pm
Now that's asking for a miracle!
carroll kiphen
17/05/2020 8:44 am
I could've i should've
pity i never did
Now that's no way to live.
carroll kiphen
17/05/2020 2:45 pm
I'd rather try and fail a thousand times
Than sit and let life pass me by.
I'd sooner lose and say I did my best
Than sit and wait to die.
carroll kiphen
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17/05/2020 6:27 pm
Yesterday I had to refill the gas can for my lawnmower. I went inside to grab an Arizona ginseng tea (my fav lol) and as I was standing at my 6ft mark on the floor behind the young man at the register, a pretty blond young lady walked in the store. Without hesitation, they immediately recognized each other, embraced, she kissed him on the cheek, and they both quickly exchanged the usual "long time no see yous". It was warm yesterday, 75deg or so, they were both wearing shorts and T's, and neither were wearing masks or gloves... in the moment, they were completely fearless. That's what inspired this lyric...
Those are good lines CK, but say them as if you're teaching your children 🙂
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17/05/2020 6:33 pm
Thats cool. Great inspiration.
carroll kiphen
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