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27/06/2019 11:17 am
Verse
You tell yourself she's the one.
No other girl will do.
Don't believe what your friends say.
That shes no good for you.
Pre chorus
There you are flying high.
You think you have it all.
But you make one mistake
And you begin to fall.
Chorus 2×
Comes a day, comes a day
The day love goes wrong.
Verse
You find yourself on cloud nine.
You're on top of the world.
You're thinking you've got it made
You've found the perfect girl.
Pre chorus
There you are flying high
You think you have it all.
But you make one mistake
And you begin to fall.
Chorus
Comes a day, comes a day
The day the love goes wrong .2 ×
Bridge
It begins with one small argument
One little thing.
It all starts unraveling, falls apart
With one tug of the string.
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carroll kiphen
YrralMallik liked
28/06/2019 1:00 am
Hello Carroll,
Looks pretty good to me, I like it. Good job on the bridge, it brings the verses, pre chorus, and chorus all together, (tongue in cheek comment), it kinda pulls it all together, LOL. Good luck and best wishes,
Speak soon
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