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Blacktop Blues


ckiphen
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Blacktop Blues

Verse

Radio’s wailing like an alley cat

A bad moon’s on the rise.

I think about you taking a shower

Can’t keep you off my mind.

Pre chorus

Gotta keep my eyes on the white line

Just to find my way.

Gotta keep my eyes on the black snake

Stay in my own lane.

Chorus

I’ve got the white line fever

I’ve got the blacktop blues

Baby I’m rolling home

Wanna make love to you.

I’ve got the white line fever

I’ve got the blacktop blues

Verse

Thunderheads booming and its pouring rain.

I can’t see down the road.

I think about you lying there naked

Can’t wait till I get home.

Pre chorus

Gotta keep my eyes on the white line

Just to find my way.

Gotta keep my eyes on the black snake

Stay in my own lane.

Chorus

I’ve got the white line fever

I’ve got the blacktop blues

Baby I’m rolling home

Wanna make love to you.

I’ve got the white line fever

I’ve got the blacktop blues

Bridge

My temperature must be one o one.

I’m homesick for your love.

I’m fighting the blacktop blues.

You’re all I’m thinking of.

Verse

Radio’s wailing like an alley cat

A bad moon’s on the rise.

I think about you taking a shower

Can’t keep you off my mind.

Pre chorus

Gotta keep my eyes on the white line

Just to find my way.

Gotta keep my eyes on the black snake

Stay in my own lane.

Chorus

I’ve got the white line fever

I’ve got the blacktop blues

Baby I’m rolling home

Wanna make love to you.

I’ve got the white line fever

I’ve got the blacktop blues

 

carroll kiphen


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AllfortheLord
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Radio’s wailing like an alley cat

A bad moon’s on the rise.

I think about you taking a shower bath

Can’t keep you off my mind.

 

Pre chorus

Gotta keep my eyes on the white line

Just to find my way.

coz in between that white line

there's a sneaky snake

 

Chorus

I’ve got the white line fever

 the blacktop blues

Baby I’m rolling home

to make love to you.

I’ve got the white line fever

 the blacktop blues

Thunderheads knockin and its pouring rain.

can’t see down the road.

I think about you lying there natural

Can’t wait till I get home.

Chorus

I’ve got the white line fever

 the blacktop blues

Baby I’m rolling home

to  make love to you.
I got the white line fever
the black top blues

shiftin these eighteen gears

to get home to you

I got the white line fever oh yeah oh yeah 

blacktop blues-----

 

This post was modified 6 years ago by AllfortheLord

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ckiphen
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Yeah that could work too. Feedback ladies and gents?

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AllfortheLord
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here's an alternate choice that came to me too that would fit into the storyline 

Chorus

I’ve got the white line fever

 the blacktop blues
pushin /burnin these eighteen wheels
to get home to you

 


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Gavin
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Those seem like some really good suggestions from Allfor. I can hear this with one of those old-time trucker song beats.

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ckiphen
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Feel free to use it and change it as you see fit.

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AllfortheLord
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I'll pitch it around to my composers to see if it gets a bite if it does will let you know

 


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ckiphen
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Sounds like a plan. Thanks!

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