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Robbi
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Over the past decade or so I’ve focused mainly on collaborations, writing and recording songs together with lyricists, composers, musicians and/or vocalists. “Take My Hand” is one of the few songs I wrote and produced all by myself. I wanted the song to sound pop/rock-ish. That’s pretty tough if you can’t play a guitar. It was supposed to sound a bit like The Rembrandts. They were pretty big here in the 90s. I’m not sure I achieved my goal 😀 . I apologize in advance for my weak vocal performance.

All the best
Robert

 

TAKE MY HAND
https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14191174

Verse 1:
Since - I met you
You’ve filled my life with inspiration
Now I – can’t control
My love for you, my adoration

Pre-chorus:
If you rise to the occasion
You will find pure fascination

Chorus:
Take my hand
Let me show you heaven
Take my hand
Never let it go
Take my hand
If you’re looking for affection
Take my hand
Never let it go

Verse 2:
I’m - in a daze
I can’t withstand the sweet temptation
Look – into my eyes
I’m burning with anticipation

Pre-chorus:
If you rise to the occasion
You will find pure fascination

Chorus:
Take my hand
Let me show you heaven
Take my hand
Never let it go

Bridge:
I’ll be your escape
Your dream come true
Come with me, don’t wait
Let me guide you

Chorus

Lyrics, music, instruments & vocals: Robert Baitinger

www.robertbaitinger.de

 

 


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lexgroove
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You've got a great song right here man. I was sold the second I heard that intro. I hear the Rembrandts influence, though I'm definitely also getting some REM vibes too. 


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Robbi
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Thanks for listening and commenting. I'm glad you liked it!

 

All the best
Robert

www.robertbaitinger.de


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ckiphen
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Really enjoyed it. Nice catchy song.

carroll kiphen


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popitup
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Robert . . . enjoyed this, uplifting and positive. You've surely got a pop rockish sound here as you mention, more pop than rock.  I don't recall The Rembrandts, but what you have here sounds pretty modern in the instrumentation to me, and it's a great radio ready crisp recording. On headphones, that intro pan guitar LR makes the head spin a bit, but I got over it once the pop kicked in . . . maybe that was your plan all along. Great stuff !


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Gavin
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Pure pop! Great instrumental breaks. Very enjoyable song. Good one, Mr B!

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YrralMallik
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Enjoyed Da Listen Me LIKES!!!!!!

Larry G. Killam


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Robbi
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Hey guys,
thanks for the feedback. I'm glad you guys liked the song.

@Gavin, I don't usually get such positiv feedback from you. Looks like I did a lot of things right this time. Thanks.

All the best
Robert

 

www.robertbaitinger.de


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Gavin
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@robbi

I hope I haven't been coming across as negative. I also hope you don't think that my positive feedback means that you did a lot of things right. More likely to mean the opposite LOL. Seriously, though, I think you did in fact do a lot of things right and the result is a cool pop song.

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