It's often said that it's a mistake to judge a lyric separately rather than as part of a song. This seems to me to be a good example. If you just read the lyric, it's a bit awkward . I sense that English is maybe not your first language. If that is the case, I applaud your efforts - I have tried writing lyrics in a foreign language and it's really hard!

Once it's combined with the music, the lyric doesn't seem so weak. As with your other songs, I like the chorus best.

I'll be interested to hear what others think. You might get more feedback if you joined in the discussion on other members' work.

Hi, 

Busted hahaha, yeah English is not my native tongue, but still, thanks for you comment and review, I'll keep up the good work and strive to create something better =)))

Once it's combined with the music, the lyric doesn't seem so weak. As with your other songs, I like the chorus best.

I'll be interested to hear what others think. You might get more feedback if you joined in the discussion on other members' work.

>>> https://soundcloud.com/user-54415704/city-cowboy

>>> https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c7wH78qtkW0

~ Lyrics ~
Verse1:
No deputy can get him arrested, it's a city cowboy out of law, don't panic(x3), he got some
morality
The sheriff got so angry seriously, in the city jungle he rides a horse, don't panic(x3), loading the pistol so deadly

Pre-chrous:
Revolvers shooting, have the torches ignited, something's wrong, and you'll see

Chorus:
We city cowboys don't belong in this tiny little town, so sick of chasing, so tired of changing, but still that we'll survive

Verse2:
No heavy mud can drag me tragically, there's a quirky story I've been told, reminds me(x3), I gotta have some morality

Pre-chrous:
Revolvers shooting, have the torches ignited, something's wrong, and you'll see

Chorus:
We city cowboys don't belong in this crazy little town, so sick of chasing, so tired of changing, but still that we'll survive

Bridge:
We riding all night, escaping from life of the city so tight, we don't want no fight

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