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15/03/2019 3:04 pm
Mesmerized
Verse
I was window shopping
When she caught my eye.
I was captivated.
Couldn’t pass her by.
Pre chorus
Like a dew drop in the morning sun;
A rainbow in the sky.
She was alluring and beautiful.
An angel from on high.
Chorus
I was fascinated by her eyes.
They had me mystified.
I was captivated with the girl.
She had me mesmerized.
Verse
I was only looking
Till I saw those eyes.
Had me contemplating
Making her my bride.
Pre chorus
Like a diamond in the evening sky;
A flower in full bloom.
She was perplexing and intricate.
Her presence filled the room.
Chorus
I was fascinated by her eyes.
They had me mystified.
I was captivated with the girl.
She had me mesmerized.
Bridge
When she smiles, when she smiles
My problems fade away.
I loved her, I love her.
And that won’t ever change.
Tag
I am captivated with the girl.
She has me mesmerized.
Mesmerized
Verse
I was window shopping
When she caught my eye.
I was captivated.
Couldn’t pass her by.
Pre chorus
Like a dew drop in the morning sun;
A rainbow in the sky.
She was alluring and beautiful.
An angel from on high.
Chorus
I was fascinated by her eyes.
They had me mystified.
I was captivated with the girl.
She had me mesmerized.
Verse
I was only looking
Till I saw those eyes.
Had me contemplating
Making her my bride.
Pre chorus
Like a diamond in the evening sky;
A flower in full bloom.
She was perplexing and intricate.
Her presence filled the room.
Chorus
I was fascinated by her eyes.
They had me mystified.
I was captivated with the girl.
She had me mesmerized.
Bridge
When she smiles, when she smiles
My problems fade away.
I loved her, I love her.
And that won’t ever change.
Tag
I am captivated with the girl.
She has me mesmerized.
carroll kiphen
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15/03/2019 3:33 pm
Hello Carroll. The chorus for this song is great. It's got a nice rhythm that leads into the great hook "She had me mesmerized." While I like the line, "her presence filled the room," I think the remaining lines of the pre-choruses could use a little work. Their rhyming and their focus on dewdrops, diamonds, flowers, and rainbows seems a bit forced, while the chorus just flows off the tongue. Thanks for posting this one. "Mesmerized" -- good title.
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