Let Mommy Go - Lyrics Library

RE: Let Mommy Go

Bogi — Mon, 20 Apr 2020 08:22:08 +0000

Thank you @japov, but - I guess - A little child doesn't talk like that, doesn't think like that.

RE: Let Mommy Go

JAPOV — Mon, 20 Apr 2020 00:13:27 +0000

Heaven is too big, I'm too small
The angels don't hear my voice at all
I close my eyes and all I see is black
I don't know what I'm supposed to do
I know my Daddy needs her too
Why won't God just give my mommy back...

RE: Let Mommy Go

Bogi — Sun, 19 Apr 2020 06:46:38 +0000

Thank you @gavin! That's not my style, either. ( I think you can see that in the lyrics?) I was trying to do something to get me out of my comfort zone.

RE: Let Mommy Go

JAPOV — Sun, 19 Apr 2020 06:32:49 +0000

Posted by: @gavin
@japov
He can play with the dog.

LMFAO... :)

RE: Let Mommy Go

Gavin — Sun, 19 Apr 2020 03:12:40 +0000

Hi Bogi. I'm having a hard time trying to help you with this one. It's so far from the kind of thing I would write. I did make a few suggestions for the first verse and chorus. Maybe someone else can help some more?

Let Mommy Go

(Verse1)
It was summer or spring
I don't remember everything
But I remember I had to wear black
So I asked Daddy "where is Mommy at?"
He said, "There's been an accident,"
And his eyes got wet

(Chorus)
He knelt down and said "Mommy's in a nice place now"
His face - it looked different somehow
I told him: "But I didn't want her to go"
He took my hand and said, "I know."

RE: Let Mommy Go

Gavin — Sun, 19 Apr 2020 02:55:33 +0000

@japov

He can play with the dog.

RE: Let Mommy Go

JAPOV — Sat, 18 Apr 2020 19:26:00 +0000

Posted by: @gavin
@japov
That makes sense, Tony. That could be a good angle.

"Lose the Jane character..." Good grief Gavin, hasn't Daddy been through enough?

RE: Let Mommy Go

Bogi — Sat, 18 Apr 2020 16:00:09 +0000

@royalestel yeah, I've been thinking about that line too and thanks for the suggestions! :)

RE: Let Mommy Go

royalestel — Sat, 18 Apr 2020 15:40:10 +0000

A little kid saying "reaction" throws me a bit. How about "The lines on his face changed somehow" because to little kids they notice the lines on all adults and call them old.

Could give the puppy a name
 instead of hair that was gray?

"I got a new puppy; her name was May"

RE: Let Mommy Go

Bogi — Sat, 18 Apr 2020 15:29:28 +0000

honestly I'm not sure with that line "I got a new puppy, her hair was gray"