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RhysFraser
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11/03/2020 8:53 am  

Just finished this. Put way more hours into it than usual, hopefully that shows on listening. I'll post the first verse lyrics below, the rest is inaudible anyways so I'll skip it 😛 Cheers

Painting dots of white so dark against the light behind that I

Can't help but be blinded by ecliptic bypass liquid crystal shine

That can't be right

it's LED I cross my eyes

Erase the line and blow my mind

And everything looks bright outside

The blinding glare of night

Stands ideally by reminding me

No sleep means feeling fine

 

I'll be alright until tomorrow

No, wait, how can it be time?

I stood in line I gave my dime

I'm tripping out no I'm alright

The slightest slight a slight lift to my mind unnaturally inclined to fight

Unfrightened by the silence breaking my

Reliance on the way I try to check my mind

Remind myself that I'm just my perception

Times my days behind which calculated by selection just weren't right every time

And some of them went uncorrected

And I that's why

 

First I tried to make a milly on a quarter ounce

Spun half toked passed gas laughed ate passed out

Woke up then spent the morning tryna figure out

How to make a milly on a quarter ounce

Then was like oh shit right that's how

 

If I take it from the rich

And then I give it to the poor

And then I wait a little bit

The rich'll only give me more

So I bought a quarter ounce

Of snowy shit then hit the store

Went home to mix and boiled it

And as I cracked the snow I roared

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Gavin
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11/03/2020 2:47 pm  

OK, Rhys, I have to ask this 🙂 Is there method to your madness? A reason that you don't want us to be able to hear what you're saying? What is the thinking behind it?

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RhysFraser
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11/03/2020 3:09 pm  

@gavin

Hey Gavin. Umm, fair question. I spliced two distinct lyric sets together, partly because I couldn't finish either and partly because I was hoping they'd work together and grow into more of a story. It went badly and I gave up, and between the delivery of the second part (believe it or not way worse than the first), the not succeeding in pulling the plots together into one story, and my general frustration at things not working right, I settled on leaving the audio but layering it into a jumbled mess and moving on. I know that's probably not the right way to do things, but I wanted to be done with it and didn't want to throw away the prior hours of work on it. Sorry if I'm rambling, hopefully that answered your question. Cheers

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Gavin
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11/03/2020 3:26 pm  

Yeah, I've had days like that. I hope you don't think I was being rude. I'm genuinely interested in what you're trying to do. 

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RhysFraser
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12/03/2020 11:09 am  

@gavin

Haha, definitely don't think you're being rude! Ya give great feedback and I always appreciate it. I cleaned up the track a bit, and I'm feeling better about it today than yesterday, but as far as the lack of sensible narrative, I guess this one is what it is 😛 Hope you're doing great man, and thanks again! Cheers

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JAPOV
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12/03/2020 11:25 am  

You have to read the lyrics Gav... The answer is always there... Lol 😎 

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Gavin
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12/03/2020 11:35 am  

@japov

Agreed, but if you are just listening, you're lost. 

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JAPOV
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12/03/2020 11:46 am  

I think that’s the trick he’s playing Gav... He'll never have any trouble with the censors...

 

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RhysFraser
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12/03/2020 1:09 pm  

@japov

Hahahaha, right? If they can't understand it, you can say literally anything! 😛

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