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JAPOV
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Fun with midi... lol 🙂

https://www.soundclick.com/music/songInfo.cfm?songID=14123100

Virtual reality
Programmed sociality
Systemized mechanoid
Predeterminality

Corrupted interface
Raging interspace
Upload error crashing
Deadly cyber race

Biomechtecaman
Doing what I can
Silicon god’s got
A perfect plan
Chip in the hand
An eyeball scan
Synthetic love
Is all I can stand
Biomechtecaman

Hyperstatic mind
Losing touch with time
Digitized morality
Justifying crime

Equation incomplete
Freedom obsolete
Programming totalitary
Humanist defeat

https://www.soundclick.com/artist/default.cfm?bandid=1449856


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Gavin
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LOVE IT!

It's all great. The lyric - I love the way you invent words, not just Biomechtecaman (which is so much fun to say), but totalitary. It just works.

Voice - just right for this. Production - great. There's a certain repetitive monotony to it, of course, which entirely fits the theme. If you could find a female vocalist to add a kind of jarringly empty backing in places, that might be really good too. Or maybe you can doctor your own voice to achieve the same effect. Just a thought.

Definitely one of your best.

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Deacon
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Hello T, this definitely shows your diverse talents, great production.  I had a hard time actually reading the lyric, not your fault, my vision is failing rapidly, but listening to the song sounds like you've got it together.  Thank you for sharing, good luck and best wishes,

Speak soon

  

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JAPOV
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Posted by: @gavin

LOVE IT!

It's all great. The lyric - I love the way you invent words, not just Biomechtecaman (which is so much fun to say), but totalitary. It just works.

Voice - just right for this. Production - great. There's a certain repetitive monotony to it, of course, which entirely fits the theme. If you could find a female vocalist to add a kind of jarringly empty backing in places, that might be really good too. Or maybe you can doctor your own voice to achieve the same effect. Just a thought.

Definitely one of your best.

Hmmmm... A random female vox... "synthefanumeros"? 😉

https://www.soundclick.com/artist/default.cfm?bandid=1449856


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JAPOV
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Posted by: @deacon

Hello T, this definitely shows your diverse talents, great production.  I had a hard time actually reading the lyric, not your fault, my vision is failing rapidly, but listening to the song sounds like you've got it together.  Thank you for sharing, good luck and best wishes,

Speak soon

  

Sorry to hear that my friend... I've been struggling with my eyesight these last few years also. Well... all my life really, among other things lol. I Feel Ya'! Sucks we gotta' get old... 🙂

I'M GOING DOWN SWINGING !

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