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ckiphen
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15/05/2020 12:47 pm  

 

 

Pretty as a Picture

Verse

She’s modeled on the cover

Of a fashion magazine.

She’s probably the finest girl

That I have ever seen.

She’s shallow and she’s selfish.

And she’ll stab you in the back.

She will sell you down the river

And never once look back.

Chorus

Her number one criteria

Is that you’re filthy rich.

She’s pretty as a picture

But she’s pretty much a bitch.

Verse

She’s the cutout in short shorts

Who is selling Miller beer.

She’s the one up on the billboard

For diamonds by DeBeers.

The girl on the centerfold

That You hiding in your drawer.

She’ll let you see most all of her

But charge for any more.

Chorus

Her number one criteria

Is that you’re filthy rich.

She’s pretty as a picture

but she’s pretty much a bitch

Bridge

She is boring and she’s rude

 as caddy as a cat.

If you really want to hurt her

tell her that’s she’s fat.

Chorus

Her number one criteria

Is that you’re filthy rich.

She’s pretty as a picture

but she’s pretty much a bitch.

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This topic was modified 1 week ago by ckiphen

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JAPOV
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15/05/2020 1:40 pm  

Well... Just say it like it is then CK, don't hold back! Lol 🙂

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ckiphen
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15/05/2020 2:04 pm  

Like you ain't never met her.

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JAPOV
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15/05/2020 7:04 pm  

Oh, I definitely know the bitch!

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YrralMallik
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15/05/2020 10:45 pm  

I'm not filthy rich so I have no worry.Enjoyed Da Read.

Larry G. Killam


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Deacon
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19/05/2020 8:59 pm  

Dang, I think I tried to date her once, (in my mind).  I love this, you got a good one started here CK, (hey I like the CK - easier to type).  Just a suggestion, keep it or sweep it, use the first four lines of the third verse as your bridge, (drop the last four lines, you already covered those in the first verse), and repeat your chorus, (and if you feel lucky, repeat the last two lines of the chorus as your outro, and drive that hook home one more time).  Good luck and best wishes,

Speak soon

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ckiphen
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19/05/2020 9:06 pm  

I'll look at it tomorrow and make the change.

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ckiphen
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20/05/2020 11:32 am  

Ok changed 3rd verse to bridge.

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YrralMallik
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20/05/2020 2:39 pm  

Sorry In thoughyt this one was for me My mistake.

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