Finally got around to this one... 🙂
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Beyond understanding
Without mortal bounds
A calm for the soul
A symphony without sound
A glimpse of eternity
A universe of mind
A choir for the deaf
Sunlight for the blind
An uncommon yearning
This unyielding desire
To know where I belong
But… it’s a subtle fire
A solace of spirit
A meaningful life
A service of praise
Is no sacrifice
An assurance of purpose
A time for release
What I find in a prayer
Is a shared silent peace
An uncommon yearning
This unyielding desire
To know where I belong
But… it’s a subtle fire
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Use it or lose it:
Subtle flame
Verse
It’s an uncommon yearning
It’s a burning desire
This feeling of belonging.
Is but a subtle fire.
Pre chorus
Beyond comprehension
Without mortal bounds.
It’s a calm in the soul.
To know what I’ve found.
Chorus
Call it faith or religion
I give it no name.
But I know that it’s burning
This subtle fire.
Verse
Universal, eternal
The beginning the end.
An assurance of purpose
On which I can depend.
Pre chorus
Beyond comprehension
Without mortal bounds.
brings a calm to my soul.
To know what I’ve found.
Chorus
Call it faith or religion
I give it no name.
But I know that it’s burning
This subtle flame.
Bridge
On cold winter nights
It keeps my soul warm.
It provides me light.
When life is a storm.
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carroll kiphen
I like it CK! It’s always interesting to see other's interpretations... especially when you’re trying to describe a feeling  ?Â
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Thought it'd be easier to put music to it. Just a thought.
carroll kiphen
Yea, work in progress... That’s always cool. Perhaps we’ll inspire someone else.
BTW... "All You Get Is Me" is the first track on Deplorable. I put your name first as writer ?
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Hey cool! I appreciate it!
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carroll kiphen
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Very cool.
carroll kiphen
Very nicely done. The mood of the music really matches the lyric well. And it's a really good lyric.
I may or may not be an enigma
http://mysteriousbeings.com
Not too "preachy" 🙂
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(:ROCK ON:)
Larry G. Killam
(:ROCK ON:)
Lol... It's interesting you say that Larry. Lately I've been exploring alternatives 🙂
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That's how we grow!Â
carroll kiphen